I second that.
Her eyes are inhuman, and she looks like some weird psychopatic alien. Also those G cups are what are they supposed to be are rather obnoxius. But hey I get the Japanese fetish - big boobed girl in what seems to be a school uniform..... hate it so much.
Indeed get your shit together. You can draw pretty amazing fantasy female without exaggerated mega jungos, and silly slutty costumes.

If you dont believe just try to google some fantasy female knight/warrior/sorceress/etc fan art. There are tons of amazing artworks to draw inspiration from, rather than the usual slutty big breasted chick trope. You´re welcome