New Girls and Hentai Scene's

[Zandel]

Has anyone else noted that the new girls (Lavender and the others added after her) do not have proper punctuation for there scenes and the words used as well as the writing in general seems a lot more crude. I just got Lilac to 100% and her scene was terrible to read, really really terrible, like a really cheap porno script that was rejected terrible.

Love this game and the scenes of the other girls I have 100%ed (20 girls so far) for the most part. Lavenders was missing punctuation but didn't seem that bad writing wise. I'm really hoping that Lilac was just an outlier and that won't happen again but i'm worried now.

Has anyone else had an experience like this?

[enigmastrike]

I did find one part of Cattleya's h-scene much more crude than it needed to be. Basically, random "fuck"s put in her lines. While she is pretty sharp-tongued, she also seems like a spoiled ojou-sama cut-off from the outside which made the use of strong expletives out of place.

[Zandel]

Lilac's was very much like that. The lack of " before and after text made reading it even harder then it needed to be as well.

Here's hoping Eld will be better when she joins us in 5 days time.

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Edelwiess seems to continue this terrible trend, made worse by the fact they are now adding words that she doesn't even say (So many F*#Ks in her dialog for no good reason). Such a shame, i'll be focusing on 100%ing the other girls now I think. Even the 2* have better scenes then these new ones.

I do like the look of many of the new girls and their voices and characters for everything else are quite good but the Hentai scene's are a real letdown. Will still be trying for that beauty in glasses they just added tho.... hope her voice fits the image.

[Tenhou]

Also not very consistent. I remember one of the last girls i maxed out used "his" instead of "my" and stuff. And Mountain Lily does have some rather crude lines too, not to mention that horrible use of "argh" as a moan...

I don't usually read the scenes a lot and skip by most of the text but even i have noticed all those horrible inconsistencies and weird word usages.

[Miu]

I just maxed out Moonvine and all I can say is... "bottomless swamp" Did anyone else find that part really funny?

[Eab1990]

I've sent a ticket about the first/third-person thing, hope they fix that with the more recent girls (it was still messed up as of Flowering/Peach, I believe).

[A Time to Screw]

You guys don't understand the deeper lore behind her backstory. Edelweiss is obviously a scallywaggin' pirate captain in disguise.

YARR HARRRGH, FUCK ME TIMBERS

[Discoceris]

You guys don't understand the deeper lore behind her backstory. Edelweiss is obviously a scallywaggin' pirate captain in disguise.

YARR HARRRGH, FUCK ME TIMBERS

[Largepotato]

I just maxed out Moonvine and all I can say is... "bottomless swamp" Did anyone else find that part really funny?

I actually found that part horrifying.

[Drynix]

I just maxed out Moonvine and all I can say is... "bottomless swamp" Did anyone else find that part really funny?

"Oh here comes the dick milk!"

Just the entire moonvine scene was so funny. Least sexy, horribly written, but funny as hell.

Its written as if I'm sitting on a chair in the corner of the room and write the commanders actions on a paper trying to be poetic about it, while also writing down everything moonvine spurts out. I laughed so hard at that scene :P